Today, my final project is nearly completed. I exported one minute to use with presentation yesterday. The presentation in the basement with only a part of students, so not a lot of feedback.

The following is classmates’ feedback with my final project:

Pasitive: 1) Really interesting idea! Good shot composition, and actress.          

                   2) The visual style is nice.

                   3) Very dramatic story.

                   4) Sounds like a complex, but interesting story. 

                    5) Lighting is interesting.

Need working upon: 1) A little hard to figure out the plot, 

however i am sure the finished piece will make it clear.

                               2) Lighting

                               3) Try to show story rather than give it away. Subtitles needed for the email shot! Motive?

                               4) The story needs to joe clearer.

Other comments: 1) Look forward to seeing the final product.

                                      2) Warch a film called “plarrorm”.

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